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 Check Point: an avatar story

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Check Point: An avatar story

Hello my name is Check Point. I may look like two poles but I am a newly created checkpoint (thanks Jui :)) by the association of recreating evaluated objects, short AREO. My mission is to infiltrate the civilization of poles on the mania planet and to convince them to join us in the fullspeed system.

This is the mission log from agent Check Point:

Day 1:This planet looks weird but kind of familiar. There are objects everywhere and racecars racing around. But they are way less aggressive and make weird breaking noises. I will need to get used to this strange sounds.
Day 5: My first contact with the poles did go well, although I was attacked early by native loops that tried to kill me. Luckily for me the poles came and saved me. They know I look a bit different than them but they think I also solve the purpose on making drivers rage. So they invited me to eat which I gladly accepted because my reserves were stolen by dirtparts.
Day 8: I made contact with a lot of natives and I don’t think they will want to join the fullspeed maps because it is way more civil and silent here.
Day 10: I met a beautiful pole named Paulina. She looks so beautiful and she wants to show me some interesting places on this planet. She also told me to be aware of a mysterious being named Areogon who comes from time to time to steal their children.
Day 17: I am now officially a pole and I am allowed to marry Paulina. I could not convince them yet to join fullspeed maps.
Day 30: I got invited to the council of the poles, where I’ll try once more to convince them joining fullspeed. And I also got some exciting news, I am so happy to announce that I am going to become father. Paulina is pregnant and we expect twins.
Day 43: The council meeting did not go well. The poles don’t want to join fullspeed. We have no ways of convincing them.
Day 45: I decided to keep living with the poles. There will be no further information exchange.

Everything went well for Check and Paulina but shortly after the birth of Paul and Jack, the Point twins, a massive army showed up. It was under the banner of AREO. The poles tried to defend their home while Check tried to talk with his former employer. Paulina stayed with the children and tried to hide them from the attackers. As Check met with the leader of AREO, he noticed the similarity between the leader and the in tales described Areogon. That’s when Check realized he worked for the monster that kidnapped poles. Areogon who noticed his creation immediately called his security to arrest Check. ‘Check do you know why I created you? You never should be convincing the poles to join fullspeed. I knew they would never agree on this because they know every fullspeed player hates poles. You were designed to get children with the poles so I can use them as new objects in my new maps. They will make people rage more’. Check who still cannot believe he was used all the time noticed some screams. It was Paulina and their children. The army found them and brought them to Areogon. ‘We got what we want guys let’s turn around’, Areogon commanded. Paulina sat crying next to Check in the arrest cell, ‘I could not hide them’. ‘It’s okay’ Check replied, ‘it was all my fault. I should have never come to your planet in the first place. I got used by Areogon this fucking bastard'.

THE END

Enjoy my map and the new Polecheckpoint :cool:
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